Naa jaane kahan kho gaye,
woh patte palaash ke,
kisi kone mein chupaye they ..
unhe talaash ke…
Unpar kahaani hai meri zindagi ki ,
chand lakiron mein likhi magar phiki si,
shayad patjhad uda le gayi,
un patton ko is jahan se…
Bas baithe hai intezaar mein..
koi laayega phir se unhe samet ke,
Ek arsaa beet gaya..yeh soch te hue,
par koi na mila,
Jo padh sake ..
dastaan woh,
jo likhi gayi thi..
un palaash ke patton par…
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For the Hindi lovers!
Kitni pak daastan hai wo,
Tumne jo kho diya tha!
Mil gaye wahi palash ke patte mujhe
Aaj jo murjhakar kisi kone me gum se hain!
Haan utha laya hun,
Un palash ke patton se
Wo dastan timhari
Jo tumse dur kahin kho gaya tha!!
Bahut hi sundar hai ye kavita!:-)
Thank you Pankaj! for the above lines !
So beautiful, and how easily one can connect to such feelings. I love your choice of words, and they carry emotions of love.
Thank you Pawan! just tried to write as the thoughts went on ..with the flow…
..and you did that beautifully.
not as beautiful as you write!
..and how I wish to write beautifully in hindi. Oh, dear.
You explored your feelings, and for me it is a second-hand experience. You deserve it, Soumya.
and those words mean a lot!
beautiful!
its very nice….
Thank you! dear
Hey saumi dear! I didn’t know you had a separate Hindi one too.
This is a gorgeous poem! I just loved it.
thank u! just started a new one! and Iam sure you will this blog as much as the old one! and will have lots to vent out!
Lovely and beautifully written!!!!’
Hi ! Thank you Aparna! hope ur fine!